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    Tell me what you think of this work. Any advice?

    Please tell me what you think, if i should add any thing take something away..
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    l RaH l, Nov 1, 2010
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    Pretty nice
     
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    Effects are pretty scattered and it has no real flow and lightsource is really bright. I don't like it sorry :/
     
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    Tell me what you think of this work. Any advice?
    The stock is cluttered and would benefit from a stronger (narrower) depth of field and more space between the elements.

    I'm not great at judging tags as they are so abstract, but I'd recommend more "flow" in the effects. The sig doesn't have a very strong direction or focal center.

    (overall, good job!)
     
    Jansen, Nov 5, 2010
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    Nice ... how long have you been gfxing?
     
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    A little too bright, but I really like it.
     
    Dimethyl, Nov 7, 2010
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    I'm not really one to talk, but I feel like her face is just too distorted; too much going on over it.
     
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    I personally like it.
     
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