Another Attempt

Kinda failed now that I look at it again :S

My goal is to make a decent tag this weekend :3



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Lol good luck with your goal I like this one more then your other one you posted theres more focal and a little better depth. I'm not a huge fan of black and white though but thats just me

 

Multiple focals going on, Over sharpened,Text doesnt work.
Seems like your in a artist block because you've done way better before the last few tags.

Download a couple PSDs to help you get out of it/look at tags.

 

definetly not your best, the color contrast is way off, not to mention that the character is basically invisible with the coloring.

4/10 (nice try tho mate >.<

 

Work on your text your choice of fonts is'n't exactly the best.
Try lurking around good graphics sites like planetrenders and gamerenders you will find a few good examples of how to use typgraphy