Abstract piece

I like this one.

rate/hate.

 

Looks like it was done in paint.

Hate.

 

No depth whatsoever. The gradients of the circles make it look like you're shining a light on it.

Colour theory needs work. Composition needs work. Effects need work.

 

Bad colors, gradients fail, no depth, no detail, no true design... 0/10 Sorry

 

This quite frankly :\The colours also are.. a different combination xD

I like the concept, though.

 

I really don't like it. It just doesn't work.


Eluveitie

 

You have the creativity, but the application you're using (I'm guessing) is letting you down. I would recommend http://paint.net/ - it's like a basic photoshop, and it's also free. In there you can have much more freedom and experiment with transparency, gradients, depth/angles, renders.. oh so much.

If you want any paint.net tips then feel free to PM me - I use it a lot for whenever I need to draw something up, weather it be for a science write up, or an abstract desktop background.

 

I use photoshop. And i'm not really a beginer haha. It was well an experiment.

Thanks tho.