College essay help

Hey y'all,

I was wondering if anyone on here is PRO at college essays. I have a nice rough draft done, and I was wondering if anyone could help with edits.

It uses basic grammar, so anyone who could help upgrade that part would be the best.

It is currently only about 1-2 pages, so not that much work

Anyone that could help me out would receive a nice reward!

Thanks,
Thinkingwithlittlehead

 

Could I ask what you wrote your's on?? I need to write mine, and I'm stumped. I heard you need to incorporate your basic values and/or things that you believe are important to you that you want to show the colleges? I don't know...

 

I wrote about how xbox took over my life but once i broke the addiction, I got a lot better at all aspects of life such as school/sports..

and no, I am not a nerd hahaha

 

help anyone ??

 

I would love to help
Send the draft to my inbox or to my email - [email protected]

Cheers,

~LS

 

I took expository writing not too long ago
hollar at me ill take a look