Freestyle to eminem lose yourself beat.

We all Know that we only have 1 shot,
so take it....


pen in paper in the hand, dont know when ill be the man, just waiting for a miracle to happen,
like i stole the spotlight from rappin, as if im kid napping, keep the beat in my head, but dont
speak to soon cuz what said is said, and it would be better done, plannin on being one, my
whole live ive heard 9, famous rappers speakin gun and pistols, cause there anger they cant
withhold, i call that pussy, cause no man should do that, depression cuz girls are too fat,
so they won't eat to get skinny, cause they think they don't look pretty, then we got police who
abuse there powers, who disrespect my city, thinking there good cause goverment got there
back, well fuck them and fk with me i got my own city on my back like a backpack,
couple more years when im big, ill look at this song like a flashback,
for now we forshadow, im 1 guy with four shadows, 1 man with the life of 4 people,
and trust me shit is what they all equal, you think you don't have a chance to compete with these
celbreties, but cut the cheese, they just human
just like us, there all beans, grown up with different genes,
poor g's wear jogs, while they wear thousand dollar jeans,
i feel like that is wrong so imma say it,
no one could take away my fredom of speech
so ill speak the words i wanna speak and y'all listen to me like im obama
on the microphone i drop bombs like im osama,
no one is stronger then u and no one is weaker
just some people are graduated cylinders, and others are like a beaker,
we just different in size, some are stupid and some are wize,
some wont die, like they got 9 lives, some go crazy like they got 9 wives,
i speak the truth the rest lie, pretty soon you'l see me on top
cause i got so much connection like im wifi.






Tell me what you think
btw i dont care if theres any mispelled words -.-=-)

 

You're ideas are clichéd and you don't have particularly good lines to back them up.