sotw entry

rate/hate

 

I like this piece - nice job! I like that there are very few external resources used (stocks, brushes, etc)

I like the pencil-work you did for the jaggy lightning-like appendages.

The splatter brush looks a little fuzzy, it kind of destroys the effect of the splatter, but it still looks alright.

The text is a slight bit aliased due to the transform applied to it. To avoid this, always warp text while it is still vectored and then convert it to raster, or ideally you could use a program like illustrator to create an actual 3D text object.

The only other thing I would suggest is to better incorporate rule of thirds/golden ratio in the placement of the lines in the background.