Post in here and ill rap about you.

go. <5>

 

Hey boi, what the fuck ya doin ujean?
Me? I'm bout to fall asleep. Will you be my caffeine?
Fuck you postin on this thread? This guy aint legit.
But for my secret azn guy I had somethin ta spit.

Lol. <3

 

Rap about me you nigga.

 

deacon
people sayin i aint legit
but them niggas gonna eat some shit
bitches dont know about my awesome vocabulary
and what the fuck i can do with a bucket of dairy

 

I said rap you rainbow face.

 

Ducel... I read your thread and you aint got shit.
Nigga chill out, get some therapy, than suck my dick.
Yea I got rhymes and a whole lot of time to spit,
Unb4ann3d already kicked yo ass
But im alot more legit
shit...

 

Wow.. lol

 

Right?

 

I had to inflict the second ass whoopin.

 

I type in a font like this cuz im really cool
Mod position open? Suck up like a fool
Get hacked erry month just dont be a hater
Banned Unbanned is my rap now I'm out cya later

 

Posting

 

Yeah. The flow isn't that great, but at least you tried, and it actually makes seom sense.

Lol. >_>

 

Ill let Unb4nned handle this one.

 

Nice forced rhymes.

 

The way I hear it the flow is great lol try reading it different its a bit fast paced.

 

Lol. Done. No multi's. Forced rhymes. And he leaves?

No. If you're going to leave, you gotta say shit if they come back try'na attack. C'mon now.

 

But im alot more legit >>> 'Least I'm legit.
*Alot and more are the same thing.

That'd make the flow better. Read it a bit faster, and it does feel better. My bad.

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Oh shit. My beatboxin love.

 

Yea but read it like "but [pause] uhm ah-lot more la-git."

 

I don't get it meow?

 

lol nvm :x