Just wrote when was bored.. :)

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Just wrote when was bored.. :)
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 25, 2010 at 2:27 AM
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    Just wrote when was bored.. :)

    Just wrote when I was bored. :)

    Sittin' there on sofa,
    Tryin' get closer,
    To the music, homie,
    That's What I told ya.

    JJ is in the buildin',
    So, please, don't leave those bitches,
    I don't want to keep that business,
    'N don't forget the Haters,
    Fuck ya'll *****, I don't want be a saver.

    I'm not that fast,
    But U can not catch me,
    'N even don't think 'bout it,
    U won't make it,
    'Cause I'm clever,
    Like livin' in Toronto would be better,
    'N seein' all those bitches,
    Movin' from the bottom to the heaven.

    It's like keepin' conversation,
    With Double-D's shawty,
    Who's name beggins like Asia..

    I wanna get a hug'ga,
    'N don't forget to leave a key under that muddy cover,
    I promise, I'll get it,
    'N I'll call u anytime, when I'll be in CA.
    Yeah, or even in Miami,
    Where shawty's booties jumpin' really impressive.​
     
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    Just wrote when was bored.. :)

    It seemed a little forced...Like you couldn't find something to rhythm so you just found a word and threw it in there no matter the context of it. Decent start though and I'm hoping to see future work from you.
     
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    Just wrote when was bored.. :)

    Yeah, I agree with u. :)

    I'm greener than Green on lyrics writin', lol.
     
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