A Rap Dedictaed To Those Who Have Been Wrongfully Banned

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A Rap Dedictaed To Those Who Have Been Wrongfully Banned
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 18, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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    A Rap Dedictaed To Those Who Have Been Wrongfully Banned

    This rap goes out to all the members out there that see the real shit going on on a daily basis, and for those that have suffered the wrath and abuse of another.

    Corruption, extortion, scamming, your appetite never gets slight
    blow away anything in your path an endless and unjustified might
    cover up the aftermath it's a motherfuckin blood bath on our behalf
    what a great path, collecting ransoms and rasps rationed and trashed
    collect your loot split it up, one for the scam, one for the cover up, and one for the boot
    a never ending cycle of torment and dispute we've lost some of the best I can attest and ingest no more of this stress
    the truth needs to come out the bullshit no fucking more
    a man once said once a scammer always a scammer yet they walk our streets like fucking whores
    picking it clean banning those with reasoning blotching and bombing their pleas and whitening them out unconditionally
    Justice is unheard of it doesn't exist so who can we trust how can we exist and persist and enlist in a neverending
    cycle of twist and untwist that consists of edits and scams and plans to demote another honest man and blindly
    rip his rep for something you planned something you committed yourself but look down upon now
    when will the bullshit end when is the breaking of dawn wheron daunting upon
    revoltion is near silence and fear are fading they dissapear plans are in gear so hear me now i'll make it clear
    you have a load on your plate don't make another mistake I'm being sincere as one of your peers so hear.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Aug 18, 2010 at 11:25 PM
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    A Rap Dedictaed To Those Who Have Been Wrongfully Banned

    We get it, you're part of the skype crew.

    On-Topic: I'm not sure if it's just a style you're going with or you always rap like this, but there seems to be many forced rhymes in there to form multies.

    But I don't think you're really looking for feedback, this is just you trying to point out you don't like how the Rawr/Finn situation went. amirght?
     
  5. Unread #3 - Aug 19, 2010 at 2:05 AM
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    Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it and I understand. I am trying to improve on this.
     
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