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  1. Unread #1 - Jul 24, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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    So, I made this for a friend. I hate the text and I'm generally not pleased with it. Comments+criticisim please? :)

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  3. Unread #2 - Jul 24, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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    the quality looks really bad :s or too oversharpened cant really tell.
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Jul 24, 2010 at 10:31 AM
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    I like it but i don't like the text :S overall 7/10

    Ps the person looks like a drag queen
     
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    Little sharp, and yeah text is eh. No real complaints besides that ;)
     
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    Yeah I way oversharpened the focal :embar:
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Jul 24, 2010 at 1:27 PM
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    I think you should lower the text's opacity and blur out her body except the hair/face so you can see the um.. 'twinkles' better lol.
     
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  13. Unread #7 - Jul 28, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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    low quality and has pretty much too much exposure
     
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    As said, the focal is over sharpened. I would add blurring to the left side. Basically where your burned it. It would add depth.
     
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    6/10 not horrible but not amazing
     
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  19. Unread #10 - Aug 1, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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    I wouldn't say the facial is as much 'too sharpened'. I think the colors go together really good but the big glare in the center doesn't go great with the shadowing to the right. I'd keep the shadowing just not as much.

    Nice job though If I had to rate it, it'd be about an 8.
     
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