Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

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Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.
  1. Unread #1 - Jun 19, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    Drop Acid, snort Cocain.
    Let the Angels dust your brain.
    Drink a court, smoke a bowl.
    Fuck this world lets rock and roll.

    Stoners live, and stoner die.
    And go to hell and still get high.
    So drop the trigger, pull the knife.
    Fuck this world, I hate my life.

    I made this up along time ago, thought I'd see what you guys thought ^_^
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jun 19, 2010 at 8:31 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    I have heard those 2 lines before, but I like the overall flow of it. Very nice.

    And that line "stoner's live, and stoner's die" very common, but you rhymed it well.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jun 19, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    I took a few lines from other rhymes.
    But I rhymed the rest myself.
     
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    Suicidal thoughts bro? That's pretty shitty :/
     
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    Very down to earth. 7/10
     
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    Very nice.

    8/10.
     
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    decent but it was killed by you swag biting other peopls rhymes.
     
  17. Unread #9 - Aug 9, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    Wow that's really good :eek:
     
  19. Unread #10 - Aug 15, 2010 at 5:08 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    Your lyrical genius has got me wet between the thighs.
     
  21. Unread #11 - Aug 16, 2010 at 1:34 PM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    very nicce but seems like yu were mad when yu wrote it
     
  23. Unread #12 - Aug 19, 2010 at 8:29 AM
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    Drug Rhyme. Rate Please.

    I really like that :)
     
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