Poem/Rap - Keystyle

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Growing up my life, Was broken and ''framed''
Couldn't see the ''bigger picture'' though I was a hoe'N'insane
Walked through my hood, Nobody knowing my name
I had the looks and the brains. Howeva my confidence was slowly drained
Got raped at a party, Afterward's felt like blowing my brains...
Cried for days like ''God, Please bestow the growing of pains''
Started being secluded-Like an arachnid caught in its own web...

9 Months later-I had my son.....
Life became clear with him, I became One!

 

not bad, keep up the good work, you'll get even better ones,
sorry to hear about everything.. glad it worked out in the end

 

Seems more like a poem to me than a rap.
But nonetheless it's deep.

Sorry to hear about that. But I think you'll do great as a mother.

 

It pretty much sucked. Nothing creative, or "deep" about it like smith seem to be saying.

 

Pretty good I'm sorry to hear about what happened :/

 

"God please bestow the growing of pains"... Huh?