example - kickstarts (bar9 remix) [SOTW ENTRY]

Not pleased with the outcome, will probably make a new entry for SOTW.

 

The left side distracts me. Add more effects you narb.

 

Left side's focal D;

 

The clipping mask is distracting, yet satisfying.

 

Lower part of his torso could possibly blend better with the object in the background? (no idea what it is haha >_<)
I'm loving the very soft lighting effects though, it's appears maybe a little off between where his arm is and his back?
Amazing entry though.... if you're not pleased with this one, I'm amped to see what you ARE please with ^_^

 

The left side is pretty distracting but its amazing, I could never do anything like this.

 

I like it dude, besides that copy on the left side, it looks pretty sick :O

 

Long story short, without the clipping mask on the left (which yeah - is distracting), the focal was the bottom right, to make the head and shoulder part the focal, i needed to achieve closer accuracy to rule of thirds, and I needed to add more space on the left, so i just clipped D:

Thanks though guys

 

Hmm I see what you mean now, the rotation of the stock doesn't help there. Although I've always found vert tags (I would consider this a vert since the stock and such is turned sideways) really difficult to do, so I understand that choice.

 

I love the song, but I love the signature even more. I don't have a clue what all you people are saying, I love it lol. You never fail to impress me TR1BAL.

 

needs more contrast, looks faded even though thats part of your style i think?
everything else looks great nice blending and colours.

 

The torso is transparent for a bit which lets through the stars. Also maybe sharpen his chest a lil more so you get more correct depth since his head is hanging backwards his chest is closer and should be sharper, right?
His arm also is very transparent. Also the flow is kinda awkward but I don't know why, maybe because the right part isn't used completely. (probably just me)
Looks good though! Goodjob.
~Naughty