This is what happens...

When a fucker like me neglects the Graphics forum for too long.....
My SOTW entry-

V3-







V4-

I don't know which is the better of them both...

CnC and Feedback is very much appreciated


EDIT: Shit, I just realized it looks semi-similar to Dani's..... it wasn't intentional man :S

 

it looks nice but that orange lighting thing is to bright IMO i love the way you made it look like a tree was comming in. 7/10

 

I should probably tone down the brightness.... true....
Thanks for the feedback.

 

I made a V2 - toned down the lighting, and fixed some of the depth which I realized was super fucked.

 

I also think that the orange/yelllow lighting is a bit to bright on her shoulder. To give it a more realistic feel turn it down on her shoulder, less than what it is in the background so it looks like the light is behind her. Other than that I dont really see anything wrong with it. Its an akward size, but we were given a tall and skinny stock. Good job, kiu

 

Version Three now.... Changed the lighting a little, made it play a bit more realistically on her face and hair. Edited the depth slightly.

 

Made another version, but I can't seem to pick which is better of the two....

 

I think it's the sex Alt. Flawless flow, flawless colouring, awesome use of lighting.

<3.

 

Danke Kaka <3
But goodness me I hated the stock we had to use.....

 

Out of the two, I think V4 is better. But then again I'd always preferred lighter signatures.

 

Thanks for the feedback man I was so undecided on which one I preferred - I liked certain elements from each, but couldn't quite merge the two.

I would love some CnC from KIABIN, Kovan, Squidge, or Dani....
HINT HINT ^_^

 

The left side is more sharp than the rest of the signature, and it distracts me from the focal. It looks as if it has too much contrast. The lighting could be placed in another spot, but it's sufficient. Yo' sexy self could have burned the edges. You should sharpen the focal, and remove the sharpness on the effects. Otherwise, I like it. Good job, bruh .

 

I think the problem with the sharpness is that it's only in that specific spot on the left, should sharpen other areas as well, although clearly you want to keep the background just a little blurred for depth purposes.

The lighting is good, but a little.. light? Haha, try using dodge and burn instead of having the light streak like that, seems like it is a bit washed out where the light is on the tag.

Also the blending on her left side is a little tacky, but I think fixing up that lighting will solve most of that fairly well.

Colours are nice, complement well, and overall quite appealing. Keep it up bro!