Need some CnC on a sig.

Hey guys, I've stepped away from gfx design for close to a year, but I'm hopping back on board. I was tinkering with photoshop for about 25-30 minutes and came up with the following. Can I get some input and tell me what to change.

V1

Cleaned


ORIGINAL:

 

stock is better than outcome;

remove or change text/border,
BG is crappy and doesnt blend with render, vice versa,
render outside of the tag dimensions looks bad, and "cleaned" version looks choppy.