Gift to kadaj

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Gift to kadaj
  1. Unread #1 - Jun 29, 2010 at 10:14 PM
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    Gift to kadaj

    Well, I got bored and wanted to make some body a gift, so heres what i made. Its for kadaj :)

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  3. Unread #2 - Jun 29, 2010 at 10:25 PM
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    It's not bad, I like the colors, and the text is almost there (maybe it if were the same color as the man's face)

    A few suggestions: I'd move the lines on the left away from the face a few pixels, blend his right side a little bit with some clipping masks or smudging, and define a lightsource somewhere.

    Looking good, KIU:]
     
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    Thanks :)
    I noticed after i posted it, that the lightsource was MIA. I cba to fix it right now since its late and i got shiz to do tommarow. Ill touch it up later. Thanks for the CnC my frind.
     
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    I really like it :) Might want to get rid of those striped shapes on the very right though >_<
     
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    Any time! I hope you keep making shit, I love what you do;] By the way, where do you get your stocks? I like this one a lot
     
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    Thanks, I get my stocks from resource pakcs ive downloaded over the last few months. I dont remeber where this one came from, I just throw them into a huge folder.

    It would loook to bare on the left to me if i did that.
     
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    I love it, thanks. I have no room in my signature to use it yet, but as soon as I can, I will.

    Thanks alot <3.
     
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    Nice work bro :) keep up the good work
     
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    No prob :)

    Thank ya
     
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    I like it. The only flaw I really don't like is the line going off of his eye. It's very distracting from the focal. The light pink c4d on the very right is pretty distracting. You could have tried to replace that with smudges. It would create a bit of more depth. Overall, good job. I like it.
     
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    Colours don't really blend, it's not always a good option of having purple as your shadow colour (adding blue + red to your shadows), effects could be far better, and as said before, the lightsource is out of place and wrong >.<

    Flow's not good, too chaotic, and the 1px lines aren't really thought through.
     
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