Ryan

My rap for you is falling behind in the Rap Battle thread, so...

Ryan please step aside before I attack
Pull out my gat and cock the shit back
Pull the trigger boom boom smack clack
Watch your body jerk back
You think you got rhyme I've heard fatter tracks
You think you got rhythm nigga I wrote the rap algorithm
Now before you spit back note one thing
Your messin with the master
And I hold back nothang
I'll make you cry and sigh as you wonder why you never had an alibi
I imply and reply with the freshest beats I'm an athlete a slayer a full time player
I'll wrap you up slap you up and toss you to the floor for sure your ass surely wont want any more

 

Hahaha! Damn those last 3 lines were sick. It was a really good rap two, i liked how mostly everything went together, and went together well.

 

Thanks man, much appreciation

 

Posting to show I've seen this. Will post later on tonight, working from home atm.

 

Oh shit, will Ryan wreck you JP? or will the master be defeated. lol.

 

I believe I have already wrecked him.

 

Aight so first off, I'm not black, so that nigga line is nothin'
But I pull the stuffin' from your bears just to show you I ain't bluffin'
But you better keep 'em close, cause when they sleep, I'm the dreams and
I wrecked your teddy's ass and gave pedobear another meanin'
There's nothin' juvenile about you, you just a church goin' mummys boy
You're just a wannabee punk, who still plays with his sisters fluffy toys
Anyone can string a rap together, and you seem to rhyme a lot,
It seemed like your whole verse was generic and multies were all you got.
Everyone wants to see me lose, so you might actually get a few,
Insteada usin' it as bragin' rights just PM me sayin "You're better, dude".
And I'm not tryna brag, it's just cocky rappers piss me off,
You're in the group as Lil Wayne, just a tick that Ima flick off,
How many more battles do you want, how many more times do I get to own ya?
I got a few days left that I'm in bed, with pnuemonia.

Btw, those last two lines are true, so let me know xD.

 

Here to give a little helping hand to JP if ya'll dont mind.

The nigger line, wasnt needed ryan, cause you're rap shows your a cracker
the mean admin thinks JP's cryin, such a mean teddy bear attacker
talkin pedo trash, teddy bears get bashed, how brash and such a Sin
don't act so rash, pull you're head out your ass before she replaces you're admin
my first Sythe rap not meant to attack, just point out weakness and flaw
got no gat's or stacks, not frontin like blacks, but I'm the illest, my lines are raw.
Jp an Ryan 1v1, looked like no fun, so I stepped up to the plate
shot my lyrical gun, so good fight son, thats how you get fuckin repaid

 

Ryan I can do this all day without a delay
Cut you up and put your body on display
Some would say rap is my forte
Used to have a show right on broadway
Now lets get back on topic, Mr. Ryan your flow is weak and bleak
You a pipsqueak with a very antique physique
I have heard better rhyme I have heard better flow
If you want to hear real rap just let me know i'll send you my memo
Give you a ratio, me 3 you 1, your chances of winning are done slim to none
Don't like my rhyme? Well this is for you, the best of the best possess
this finessed ability I suggest you don't oppress I rhyme with stability
I have agility I can repress, digest, and express with the best
I don't mean to depress but your messin with the best in the west.
Though I must admit your better than I figured but your nothing more
than a dot, a small insignificant spot that's easily forgot your withered
Mister Ryan don't call me a punk don't call me a juvenile
I'm a mobile gentile with infinite freestyle I would prefer some respect
and perhaps a rap worthwhile.

 

JP goes hard. Ryan's was dope too. & a nice squeeze in by plznate. Liking the raps guys

 

I Love reciting all the raps I see on this forum, my only problem is that I haven't got rhythm

 

Damn, shit is hitting the fan. All these raps are raw as fuck. Keep it up. I really enjoy reading/rapping(trying) this stuff.

 

Glad to hear people are enjoying the "battle".

 

you guys should post in the rap battles thread! I need more competition.

 

Still waiting on a reply from Ryan.

 

me too bra, cause my 8 lines were so money.

 

I guess Ryan gave up, it's been a couple days...no response.

 

Ryan is pretty ill at the moment, just so you know.

 

niga fuck do what i dont even fuck this nigga wut

Edit: I drive a Chevrolet movie, theatre.

 

Your both bitches, both wack ass rappers
Ima take both your mothers home and unleash the magnums and give you the wrappers
The only type of MC's you guys are, are the ones before donalds
such a clown you both are, tryna go mano emano
shit i spit will kill ya either stereo or mono
so check yourselves and leave lil wayne off your tongue
mad at his flow cause you aint the one getting it done
you can dislike rappers but cant be a hater
cause i'll have ya teeth look about as handsome as Flava
so ima trey songz out in this bitch, later
oh yeah and if you wanna know my name ask ya neighbour
cause your mum was screaming it when I came to do her a favour