Freestylin' (My first time doing this)

Been in this game for years!(sorry biggie)
Made me animal
Eat more pussy than muthafuckin hannibal
Everytime i fuck a bitch
i make that muthafucka twitch
fuck all you hoes tryna
hop on my panis
only way ill fuck ur hoe
is in the muthafuckin anus
wurd bitch(<--------lololo poser)
lol sorry for my very poopy rap but plz rate this piece of shit

 

I don't know if it's just me, but half of this doesn't make sence, or is just..Pointless?
Eat more pussy then a hannibal? Fucking a bitch, and making her twitch?
Can you even tell me what the definition of hannibal is?

 

U DMX or something rappin bout dumb shit? lol 4/10

 

It sounds like a generic rap to me, good job.
(I don't listen to rap so..)

 

Erm.. the movie hannibal.. the guy who ate people.. and i girl CAN twitch if her orgasm is strong enough

 

3/10 lmfao.
You gotta get more real lmao

 

If that's the case, why are you relating eating dead people, to a pussy?
I mean hell, if that's how all rap is I'll continue to stay out of its' way.

 

It's got flow, but you need get more educated lyrics....

 

Agree'd
Sounds like a little kid with a bad mouth wrote it, lmfao.

 

LOL'd at lacuna's post... if you consider 15 little then yes.. i am little... agewise... every aspect of me little? No. 6'5" 220 lb lol far from little.. the bad mouth.. not in public.. I rarely mouth off to people apologize alot and thank people quite a bit.. I absolutely HATE being rude... makes me feel horrible.. i also hate when i with rude people

 

Whenever writing a rap you should never take someone else's work

 

Not to be a dick or anything, but is the first 3 lines not in Eminem's new album? I downloaded the whole thing for free shhh.

EDIT: Juvienilepunk I love Ron Simmons "DAMN!" he makes me laugh every time I see him.

 

LMAO.

gf.

 

The first two lines are from 10 Crack Commandments by Notorious BIG

 

1/10, work on it. "Hop on my panis"...I lol'd

 

so wait your 15, your 6.5, you weigh 220 lb and you can't rap.

I think you should retire.

and can I ask whats a 'Panis'?

Also you hate being rude but you swear more than five times in this 'freestyle rap'

 

If Weezy can do it, he can do it. Doesn't matter if the lyrics don't make sense, you make the track sound hot and people be all over your dick.

 

lol thanks guys haha i didnt intend for this to be a good rap at all... im thinking of another one right now.... also note.. I like my raps perverted or funny i aim for laughs

 

0/10. your fucking terrible

 

thanks i really aprreciate it... doosh