Borders not really needed. and it looks like its just a render on a clouds background.. but it looks nice 6/10
No offecnce but this is bad. All you have done is place a stock some C4D renders, light source and a border and said its finished. 1/10 the 1 is for effort in finding the stuff.
its ok, just work more on your blending and have a decent concept before you start the girl is nice but your effects dont suit it and not much else is happening.
