Typography

What do you think? It's chaotic, but I like it:]

http://i48.tinypic.com/2d6k6t3.jpg


V2

http://i45.tinypic.com/11tan8p.png

 

Its very chaotic and theres not alot of blending (Lots of different colors) But other then that its looking nice.

 

you should have feathered the big pink and blue lines coming out the ends of the letters. they look pixelated.

 

Nai that's cuz it's sharpened after that.

FOOL!

and background's a stock bokeh think - not cool

colours don't blend - not cool

composition - not cool

overall - pretty cool

 

Thanks tribal:] Really, it was just a experimentation of a bunch of stuff I've seen around the internet, I'm glad it at least earned a pretty cool overall;D

Oh, by the way, I made the bokeh

 

From what I can see, it looks very poorly planned and composed. The skills are definitely there and with a lot more careful planning regarding composition and colour schemes, you can definitely create a powerful piece. It's probably a good idea for you to go right back to basics and focus on things like colour theory and perhaps picking your colours from a colour sphere.

 

I'm a little stuck right here, potential could of been great.
I love those styles. but the colors don't go well and it hurts my eyes to look at it.
Sadly, what could of been a great piece turned out a little wrong.
It looks to sharpened and over done.
Keep working on this I'm sure you will find the right composure of colors!

(Nice Gina Carano btw haha)