Some new work (Tell me what you think)

I found the stock on google while looking for some stuff to make a practice fire cape thread layout. What do you think?

 

I'm not really liking the text, and the entire right side looks a bit iffy to me. Other than that, nice job.​

 

I can barely see the text, its a little dark, other then that its very nice.

 

Think I may outline it in a light red, try to make it stand out some more.

 

looks kinda LQ and monotone
add some more effects or lighting

 

Text is just a bit akward imo, the left side is a bit plain and the depth is a little off. I think if you brought your focal to the front more and added some more stuff on the left it would look better. Overall good job tho.

 

I really like it tbh. It's a sort of in your face sig.

Good work

 

I can barely see the text, its a little dark, other then that its very nice.

 

Don't use scan lines - bad call.
Detracts from the focal and reduces the depth.
(Scan lines are the patterned lines you've overlayed across the majority of your signature)