Drift CnC

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Drift CnC
  1. Unread #1 - May 31, 2010 at 2:57 AM
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    Well CnC please.
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    V2
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  3. Unread #2 - May 31, 2010 at 3:02 AM
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    I'm not big on critiquing GFX, but I really like the text on this.

    The flames coming from the back of the car seem a bit too "Boxy" and straight edged at the end, though, if you see what I'm talking about.

    Again, I'm not GFX suave.
     
  5. Unread #3 - May 31, 2010 at 5:08 AM
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    That's a nice sig :) But yeah, those flames look a bit...contained if you know what I mean.
     
  7. Unread #4 - May 31, 2010 at 11:13 AM
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    The flames are contained. The flames UNDER the car kill what little flow there was. Stop using the same damn font for every sig. Wtf is that thing in the left corner?

    Other then that it looks kinda cool.
     
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    added a V2 :)
     
  11. Unread #6 - May 31, 2010 at 4:07 PM
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    The addition of second text makes it alright but stop using the same fonts..

    Also, stop adding effects under the care, you just did more, it kills the whole thing.
     
  13. Unread #7 - May 31, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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    I wanted to hide that fact that it abruptly stops and hide that random ass thing in the bottom left :)
     
  15. Unread #8 - May 31, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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    Use clone stamp to remove the thing at the bottom left, you could make it work with flames under the car but youd have to work on depth, which would call for more effects in front of the car.
     
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