not finshed need ideas

need ideas and go ahead and rate what i got done so far

 

Looks like a render glow c4d and pen. Nothing's going on.

 

there is no render glow, no C4d and no pen tool.....

 

I think all you did was use a gradient and then smudged the middle put the render there and put a huge light source in the middle that's too bright. Try to make a background next time and for the placement of the stock look up "the rule of thirds" that should help you out. Also, try using some c4d's and giving it some flow.

 

Lens flare sorry, then whats the random white line? And the main thing behind the girl?

 

behind the render is smudging then i added a hue layer and the random white line is just a small brush i used.

 

Oh, well its good but the lens flare ruins it and the brush is weird, its a good start just needs more effects.