Newest [In Progress]

Still working on it, need some C&C and tips, i kind of followed a tut but used a render so substituted some things.



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Tbh the backround and border are kinda boring. Idk other than that its sick. Maybe like a different Text color? I really like the leaves
Again this is just my philistine opinion

 

Any suggestions for the background? I tried some C4D's but they didnt seem good, ill try some more. What do you mean the border is boring?

 

IDK, I guess I'm just unused to using renders, just the color scheme might be a bit more vibrant if you toned up the contrast. Again I'm unused to using renders so I really don't know

 

I'll see what i can do.

In the mean time i threw this together, friggin 50 something frames and it isnt even that smooth tbh. Might re-do it.



Suggestions?

EDIT: Oh yeah it needs redone haha. Anyone know if theres a faster way to apply the same time to every frame?

V2: Left out animation for now

 

V2:



Added a C4D.

 

C4D helped it (a little, but now it is a little messy but shouldn't matter). Remove the 1px yellow border, makes it look stupid. I like the general idea of it, but I don't like the style. Render could be blended better, try smudging parts of it. Maybe a gradient map or a photo filter will sum it all up.
Nod bad.
On the avatar: Nice and simple, but pen tool isn't done that good, imo.

 

Im scrapping the post, ive made a new sig and gonna want c&c on it instead, close please.