Storm the Troops!

Couldn't get the colours the way I wanted

 

Nice, not your best work though.
I liked your last one alot better.

 

Thanks.
Would like some cnc.

 

Well, the left side looks kinda blank,
you could of added some text or maybe even master cheif.
I dunno.

 

To help with color maybe you can make a new layer set it to Hue or Overlay and color the color you want over it then it should blend a little better.

also this is just me but I dont like the size

but otherwise its a good sig

 

Thanks.

 

wow.. i love it

 

Thanks.

 

The colour doesn't match the actual render, it is really really really bland and the only flow is on the arm and the rest is all whacked and going everywhere.

The easiest way to get the same colour is to just open up the colour tabs and just highlighting over a certain area of the render and trying working around with the colours to see which ones blends in the best.

3/10.

 

I personally like the second one better, and I think the colors blend well. I do however think the left side could use something more, you should try and fix that!
OT: i know nothing about GFX,i'm giving you cnc that (imo) would make it look cooler

 

While the effects themselves aren't that bad, the blending, lighting, and colors are terrible on the eyes.

Play with some adjustments on the stock (Image>Adjustments). Try several gradient maps, with different blending options on different layers of the render. Curves can also do some wonders.

Adjust the saturation of the background, it is too bright and takes away from your focal. Some lighting effects (filter>render>lighting effects, for starters), and blur it, (filter>blur>[try gaussian blur]) to add depth.

The render doesn't stick out enough, and you have way to much empty room on the sig, readjust the size, or fill up the empty space with some c4d effects.

Some text would make it more sig like, and make it less empty, but it has to be done right.

Just some thoughts.

 

Nice sig although you should add more detail to the left side of it.