My Raps. Lame, Just Rate Please.

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My Raps. Lame, Just Rate Please.
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 23, 2010 at 9:45 PM
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    My Raps. Lame, Just Rate Please.

    Hey, i'v just been bored and makin up some raps. There lame as shit but tell me what you think. Yea, there short, but just tell me if u think i got any hope. lmfao thanks. Tell me what you think, no hard feelings.

    It's like, I typed really black. Just to make it sound more legit =D lmao

    (How I shoot)


    first of all, i aim my shit
    down yo momma back, to da spine i hit

    she cry, she whine
    she wish that i would die

    i can not stop
    till i hit the top
    its about time

    its all about where i shoot my shit
    i aim it at yoe momma
    to the ground she hit

    then i run, i cut
    then i feel my gut

    turn, ache and grind
    then i look behind wishin i culd just
    REWIND


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    Runnin from the five o'



    five o' five o'
    after me cuzz uh hoe

    she snitched, at nothin
    i run cuz im bluffin

    when i see the cops
    my speed turns to the top

    i can run so fast
    niggas cant even see my path

    got me scared
    got me paranoid

    thinkin that i enjoyed

    the rush, the run
    hope u havin fun

    when im out
    imma kill ya hun

    now whos havin fun


    There lame, but thanks. lmao


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    lmao wow this shit is sad. Im just gottin shit down. Bored as hell :p


    Ah ha

    here we go


    Bitch if u fuck with me
    my people wont let u be

    nigga u got me fucked up
    in the head

    ill leave yo ass bloody red

    on the street
    check me out

    nigga thats without a doubt

    u cant even blame me
    better be ashamed of me
    I find
    yoe house

    lift up
    momma's blouse

    eat her shit
    it was lit

    Yea, her clit

    then i shot a bitch

    cut out that crib
    i shot her rib

    next thing i no
    that bitch called a poe

    cause ill kill a bitch
    make her twitch

    u think im playin hoe
    Bitch YOU AINT FUCKIN NO
    ----

    You can help me out if you want, im workin on this right now







    i destroy the compotition when i spit
    just listen

    when i rhyme
    shit i do all the time

    thinkin its a joke
    till yoe bitch ass choke

    choke croke
    like it when you smoke

    cause yoe raps in jank
    vodka, fill up my tank

    yoe shit is dead and outdated

    mines all the way to the top.
    and high rated
     
  3. Unread #2 - Apr 2, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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    That was lame no lie, you wasted so many bars on blank shots.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Apr 2, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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    Keep on working on your raps, Keep on practicing.
    Practice and you'll get better :)
     
  7. Unread #4 - Apr 11, 2010 at 1:28 AM
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    That was corny as hell no lie.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Apr 15, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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    bro, try keep every 4 bars having 9-14 syllables in them, you will find they work ALOT better.
     
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