My Call of Duty Poem

Yeah, so in my English lesson, we had to write a LOVE poem, and my friends all dared me to write about CoD. They told me to use the excuse of "My lust for CoD" if he asked why I had written about a game. So, what do you guys think about it? My teacher said I had real talent, even if it was slightly off topic

Too much CoD for good

In
the slums
of Brazil beneath the
Lamb of God’s eyes, Throwing
knives and semtex fly through the skies
I swear to you solemnly I tell you not a lie, Call of Duty,
Modern warfare 2 is the apple of my eye.


Chopper Gunner, Predator, AC-130,
These all boost my kills,
my tactics aren’t dirty,
8 days I’ve spent with you none that I regret,
35 kills in a row, my highest streak yet,
I’ll always stay faithful, until your sequel,
Along came Paul Flynn, my only equal,
Teamed up with me to show our love,
Down came my nuke, high from above.
GAME OVER
​

Back ground info:
Paul Flynn is a friend who I play with.
I have in fact had 8 days game time.
35 KS is my highest.
I have also called in a nuke before. Several times.

Can you answer these?

What did you notice?

Can you explain the line "under the Lamb of God's eyes"?

In the first Stanza (paragraph in poetical terms) do you notice anything about it's shape?

What are you thoughts?

Have you made anything of a similar idea?

 

Sick poem, hahah better than anything I could do.

 

Thanks.

 

Nobody else?

 

Wow dude I thought it'd be stupid but I actually laughed haha
Great stuff , what did the class think?

 

Fuck yeah.

 

They thought it was amazing. My teacher just stood there and his mouth actually just dropped. All the boys were like " YEAH WE LOVE YOU!" and the girls thought it was funny as fuck and they don't even play

 

Hahahaha good one mate!

 

<3 I fucking love it. Nice job. xD

 

Is the shape of the first stanza a stealth bomber?

 

Yes it is. Well done. Can you answer any of the other questions though?

 

Fuking Love It!

 

thanks guys!

 

Yeah I thought the first stanza looked like a stealth bomber or a harrier. The lamb of God is a biblical meaning and the name of jesus. Good Poem, whats the beat of it, like how would you say it?

 

In the first Stanza (paragraph in poetical terms) do you notice anything about it's shape?
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Is it a stealth bomber?

 

You sir, have talent. Really good, tbh.

 

WoW

 

5/5 man...
If I was in your class...

 

5/5 man...
If I was in your class...

 

5/5 man...
If I was in your class...