New signature...

I did that exactly, and listened to Dani and got this:



CnC

Update:

 

Too much head room. See the rules of photography.

 

Rules are there to be broken right? Plus I'm a noob and didn't know any rules of photography.

 

1) try spread the effects out and have more of them, experiment more vividly with colour, you'd be surprised that colour's easier to work with in some cases than you think.

2) as SMI said, try rule of thirds, and spread effects out more.

3) Try not to smudge obviously, it lowers the level of the signature.

Great improvement though

 

Thanks for the advice.

 

Updated with:

 

Better but her wrist is at the third, not her focus.

 

It Looks good apart from the wrist looks a bit different to the other effects