BreakDown

I haven't been to Sythe for awhile, but I remember ya'll had a good graphics area going on.

I made this because I was super bored. Nothing compared to everyone else here, but you guys have good comments here, so here you go.

I couldn't get the text right, but I figured it was fine where it was.


Stock:

 

The glowing around the focal messes it up completely. The fractal should be sharper, and so should the stock. It also needs a lot more contrast. You need to also work on colors, and light sources. All you need to do for the light sources is look where the light is coming from on the stock, and add light with a soft brush.

 

Thanks, it all helps, especially about the light sources and contrast :]