Little Rap I Wrote

Got bored and wrote these for some reason, ratings and feedback welcome.

Some die old some young
Even some die for things they havn't done
You look around and think whats this world become,
Youve got crimes over here youve got crimes over there
All over the world theres crime everywhere
The police cant stop it they wont admit
They keep on chasing but the thugs wont quit.

All these thoughts in my head
How i want you in my bed
You were my life and soul
Now im on a bad roll
Get dressed up
Pull out the charm
You plus me
Cant do no harm
I get high every day
Drunk every night
Hangover to come but its alright
Wake up in the mornin see the sun shining
I live a life of luxury and fine dining
Nothing gunna get me down
Ill always be around
Live for the moment
Never worry about the rent
Always have a good time
Addicted to drugs and crime
My life is incredible
I am invincible.

Another I just wrote:

Thanks for the good times
Keeping me away from voilence and crimes
Your always in my heart
To me were never far apart
I will always love you
You showed me things I never knew
We had our ups and downs
Your a princess you deserve a crown
You changed my life forever
Unknown til now you made it better
I never wanted to lose you
My dreams were coming true
You were all I wanted
But I took you for granted
My stupidity cost me dearly
Although now I can see clearly
Sadly we came to an end
Would my heart ever mend
I didn't know what to do
How could I stop loving you
Time healed my pain
Our feelings went down the drain
Looking back it would have never lasted
We were too contrasted
Now I finally managed to move on
After everything has been said and done
I'd hate to see you again
My anger I could not contain
Take your stuff and just go
I hope your happy, hoe!