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My little rap!

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  1. IKillYou

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    My little rap!
    I'm amazed at my blaze
    from this purple sticky haze.
    You better watch out cause'
    I'll put you in your place.
    Watch what you say
    cause' i'm skuxx deluxe and im gunna rep it out,
    walkin round town reppin beeez up....
    What up on the marty streets
    Running on my feet from the po-lice.
    cause' I'm bored all the time,
    committing all the crime,
    tryna make a dime fuckin all the bitches in a line.
    Now this was my story don't ever ignore me cause'
    I'll put you on your ass takin all the glory

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    IKillYou, Jan 17, 2010
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  2. iDesignLogos

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    My little rap!
    I like it :D

    I don't listen to rap but reading lyrics can be interesting.
     
    iDesignLogos, Jan 19, 2010
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  3. nautiiquan

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    My little rap!
    it wack lol
     
    nautiiquan, Jan 19, 2010
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  4. Gorgankle

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    My little rap!
    I'm amazed at your rhymes
    they speak of good times
    like smokin da dank buds
    and soakin in the suds
    Nautiiquan is hatin
    cause you ain't fakin
    but I say fuck his ass
    I'll turn his face to a black mass
    For dissin on your game
    Cause homie you'll earn fame
    just don't turn lame
    check it Gorgankle just Came
     
    Gorgankle, Jan 19, 2010
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  5. boss_deejay

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    My little rap!
    why about drugs lol. but nnice how long it take u to think of that ?
     
    boss_deejay, Jan 21, 2010
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  6. IKillYou

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    My little rap!
    Just done a bit every day
     
    IKillYou, Jan 25, 2010
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    My little rap!
    Soakin in the suds? Haha, like OP's more.
     
    eFSko^, Jan 25, 2010
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    My little rap!
    very nice, u wrote this in 1 day ?
     
    loving_spec, Feb 4, 2010
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    My little rap!
    Kinda short but yeah it's aight
     
    xPHOBIAx, Feb 10, 2010
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  10. Ryan

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    My little rap!
    You're 12 and part of the reason people hate rap.

    "committing all the crime,
    tryna make a dime fuckin all the bitches in a line."

    No.
    ​
     
    Ryan, Feb 11, 2010
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    My little rap!
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    It's pretty good actually, better than I could do.

    Agreeing with Ryan, try to replace the fuckin all the bitches line.
     
    Surround Sound, Feb 11, 2010
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    My little rap!
    I have to agree with Ryan, the lyrics are stale and the flow seems poor.
     
    tofurocks, Feb 14, 2010
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  13. IKillYou

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    My little rap!
    I don't mind that you don't like it, but why would you think I'm twelve?
     
    IKillYou, Mar 19, 2010
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    My little rap!
    I think it's alright, get the haters off your back.
     
    The_Ohner, Mar 19, 2010
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    My little rap!
    Hey man if you enjoy what you're doing, more power to ya
    3/10 for lyrics though
     
    Gohan, Mar 19, 2010
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