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  1. Charlieb1212

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    Designing a logo for an Advertising class I'm taking in school.


    Whattaya think?
     
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    Doesn't look too bad. But I can't read the red text.. I don't really like how you added the low opacity thing in the background either. Overall, 6/10.
     
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    It looked rather bland without it.
     
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    Firstly, you used a far too complicated secondary text, and the logo's not too bad - it would look just as effective on a business card as on a huge billboard.
     
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    I was thinking that, I'll go in a and change it.
     
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    I think it looks great, only that red tekst is hard to read...
    9.5/10
     
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    I re-did this and added some basic shading, it looks pretty good.

    I'll post the update sometime next week.
     
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    Doesent look all that bad, Do some more shading and make it look cleaner. 7/10
     
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    The background text is really bad alltogether, the primary text looks really good, the secondary one in the middle which reads "Advertising" is bad, the image seems really low quality too.
     
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