My typography

Here is one of my first attempts at making a typogrophy, tell me what you think.

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Less Brightness
Eliptical Shadow Rather Than Circular

 

I think it's pretty nice.
The white needs to be brighter in the middle, and darker on the edges to give it more shape.

 

I see you have followed the basic tutorial.

 

Looks good for your first typogrophy I also like the one better in your signature good luck hope to see more.