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Daft Punk Sig V1.01

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  1. HumblePi

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    Daft Punk Sig V1.01

    Let me know what you think and how i can improve it :)

    Thank you =]

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  2. Alteranz

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    You should work on your text, it's very pixelated and not well placed, neither is it a very nice font. The circle motifs are icky... because I know they're from a stock brush... SO remove them.
    Just some minor things to work on in the time-being, I'm not going to rip it in to bits ^_^
     
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    Better improvement from the last time. Like stated by alteranz, the text isn't satisfactory.
    Try picking a text like neuropol, it might fit. Try putting the text in a place where it will stand out.
     
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    it would look much better with a darker background. and dl some good graffiti brushes for the arrows from devianart. and use some layer styling.
     
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    scan lines kill depth. Integreate text better. Use liquify or something to add contrast the the rigid lines of the brushes.
     
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