rap dedicated to my grandmom 12.23.09

Ey yo ma maw neva got to meet ya
at least i know you're spending Christmas with Jesus
ain't nothing like losing a loved one
no matter how long you knew them
there is never enough time to fully get the job done
they say time flies when you're having fun
you only died once but i've died a thousand and 1
ima miss you
ima be a man now and stop filling up tissue
i know i aint a beast like wayne
but at least i got game
ima spit the truth
like 2pac this shit's gonna come from my roots
Ima see you one day Grandma
This is zack here ain't got any more time to shed tears
stay cool stay fly stay loved
i'll love you foreva thats a promise
if i'm lying you can sue me
get a judge
And no God i aint planning on a grudge
i just wish you left me more time
hope you listened that's my way it's my life
put out into rhymes

 

wow i almost cried....

my grandma passed away this september.... My condolences, Zack.

 

Nice, Heartwarming Poem.

 

Didn't like it.

Good meaning, though, essentially. Empathy for you.
Don't forget to smile.

 

Sorry to she passed away- hopefully you can find peace in your above line, though.