Don't be upset at the comments. It looks like you just took a render/stock and put A c4d onto it. Try adding more effects, smudging, bluring background, and adding some gradient maps. I reccomend keeping the text normal (without very little space between each letter), and adding a sub-text. 5/10.
well thank you, i just got into sigs about 2 days ago and this is my first decent lookin one, well at least i thought.
