Abstract

Used this stock: [Click Here]

Not one of my best signatures though :/.

There are two versions to this

V1 -




A kinda redesh version.
Looks better then V2 imo.


V2 -





Bluesh version, text doesn't look too good on it.

V3-



Sharpened and blured.



It does seem a BIT over worked, but tell me what you think.
C&C

 

Idk why but the blue one just looks amazing too me

 

Thanks .

 

I like the text on the first one. But, the first seems a bit too dull. Try adding more contrast and sharpening it.

 

I love the second one but if you could change the abstract to a different color, mabye a dark purple? it'll look SOOOO much awesomer,but its really pretty

 

The Blue one looks amazing,

Maybe try a dark pink or a purplish colour to it. Im thinking of good results there.

Nice work

 

Should I just apply the image and sharpen it?
Thanks for the feedback.

I'll post another one with purple.
Thanks for the feedback,

Yeah I'll post another one.
Thanks for the feedback.

 

I love both of them.
Nice work

 

As KIABIN said, add contrast to the first, and sharpen the focal/blur the bg.

I'm more a fan of v1 than v2, the colours are nicer, and less monotone.

Your text needs to improve, since it's really not up to the standard with the signatures you're making - the signatures are usually really good and the text holds it down >_<

 

Add contrast first, and then apply image and sharpen.

 

Thanks

Sharpened the focal, blured the background

K did that:



But I also blurred the background, like tr1bal said.

 

It looks 10 times better.

 

So, you mean good?

 

It's confusing on what the focal is supposed to be.

 

I tried to make it visible, and you can tell if you just look at it for 2 secs (its that person..).

Other then that, is it good?