It's called, "3rd Period".

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  1. Unread #1 - Dec 19, 2009 at 1:59 AM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    Read it emotionless-ly. (That way, you find the right rhythm.)

    Blind is this false sense of hope,
    A withered dream that would not show.
    But on the other side of it,
    A forgotten love that could not grow.
    Either way,
    On either path,
    Inevitably,
    I'll lose the game.
    Preparing these garments,
    Lies and truths,
    The cloaks of which should hide my shame.
     
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  3. Unread #2 - Dec 19, 2009 at 2:13 AM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    its good. :) write another and post pls
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Dec 19, 2009 at 7:21 AM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    Liked it. Id rate it a 6/10
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Dec 19, 2009 at 2:11 PM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    It was okay.. Pretty average stuff. 5.5/10.

    On second though, I really like

    Preparing these garments,
    Lies and truths,
    The cloaks of which should hide my shame.

    so 7/10.
     
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  9. Unread #5 - Dec 28, 2009 at 3:58 PM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    I would rate it probably a 6/10.


    P.S. Was the reference to "THE GAME", intentional?
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Feb 4, 2010 at 10:50 AM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    not bad. i like more rhyming though
     
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  13. Unread #7 - Feb 10, 2010 at 2:19 PM
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    It's called, "3rd Period".
    hello guys ...


    its really nice post....


    i just liked it....


    thanks....
     
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