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  1. Draucia

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    The stock I used for this is located at deviantart: Here

    Gaze -

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    Some clipping masks, splatters, and c4ds.

    C&C.
     
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    try to make the focal point apply to the rule of thirds. Also, the colouring is slightly too purple, and a little cliche (because of the overused purple to orange gradient).

    Try to vary the colours more, but good work :)
     
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    If I put the girl on the side a bit, I can't really have a flow outward anymore (which I like). I would either have to make it come to the left, right, or diagnal.

    @Coloring: Yeah I guess it has a bit too much purple, but I kinda like it.
    Is the text good this time?
    And thanks for the feedback!

    (I put gaze because shes kinda gazing at the sky).
     
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    Idk, I kinda like it, allthough it's too much purple IMO. ;)
     
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    The render itself isn't very good to work with, since it doesn't have a good natural flow.

    and the purple is overwhelming, and at least have a part of her on a hotspot - that's why it's a bad render.
     
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    I picked the STOCK because I thought it would go nice into a signature.
    By hotspot do you mean the intersection of the lines in the rule of the thirds?




    EDIT:

    Yeah, it does have a bit too much.
    Thanks for the feedback.
     
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