freeverse

Now theres a mirror to reveal these evil sins
We see the nearer version of their feeble grins
Now lets plaster there masters on the television screen
And cause natural disasters, to envision obscene...

Now lets comprehend the confusing blend
The difference between funny kids and amusing men
Is the logic of which we create our humor in rhymes
Ill pull a kanye and say "this free verse is the best of all time!"
Maybe ill be like Vick, and if your like Pit ill kill your style quick?
Get?, no because i dont rap, i write poetry that rhymes sick
Never have i heard a line that i couldnt compare to mine
I got old men saying they could be my lifeline
Saying that my music would be playing for a lifetime
If only i went under their wing and gave them my lines
every cent i earn i put in your bling? make sense why try?
To copy because i know my shit is sloppy
The metaphors are messed, and my bar timing is choppy
But i dont give a shit, cuz its the way i spit
I earn every rhyme i write, and all the pay i get
And even though i flow a little bit silly im still getting high
and pull a offspring, because im pretty fly for a white guy



LOL horrible idc... it was a freestyle dont care

 

Your rhymes are way to cliche. Increase your knowledge of a dictionary to make your vocabulary better. Lil wayne can even do that.

No offense, just commenting.

 

nah bro its cool to be honest this was just to show that i was still alive

i used to post alot of music on here (ive gotten much better, this was just kind of a im still here piece )