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Newest Signature
  1. Unread #1 - Nov 29, 2009 at 9:04 AM
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    I tried to include everything in this signature. I tried to make it flow, add depth (I made background kinda dark and made taylor stand out), and tried to focus mainly on three colors (like Kaiban said), I even added a splatter clipping mask, and I tried to add lighting on the right side of her face.

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    I think I did the best job on text.

    Here is the PSD file if you would like to see what I did/did wrong:


    Click for here for download (Mediafire).

    I know nobody will because it isn't that good, but I'm still going to say this.
    DO NOT RIP!

    C&C
     
  3. Unread #2 - Nov 29, 2009 at 9:19 AM
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    I like it, the obvious down fall for me is the text.

    I do agree with what KAIBIAN said in the sense that three coulers looks good.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Nov 29, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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    Awww I thought I did good on the text. I'll post a V2, trying to improve it.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Nov 29, 2009 at 7:01 PM
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    Lol i hate the "taylor" part of the text, a little to dark?
    TBH, i see a lot more than 3 colors.
    Like the flow though.
    She seems a bit too light.
    And add a lightsource.
    But this is your best signature yet. You should replace your current one.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Nov 29, 2009 at 7:05 PM
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    Yeah I'm going to post a V2, fixing the text, as I said.
    I said I tried to focus on, It's mostly green, whitesh, and a bright yellow[esh].
    Well I did add a lightsource (right side of her face), I think that's why you think it's too bright.
    Thanks for the feedback!


    Edit: Did you notice the splatter clipping masks?
     
  11. Unread #6 - Nov 29, 2009 at 8:19 PM
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    draucia. i love the sig u made me. and i like another for my buisness. contact me on msn again to talk : [email protected]
     
  13. Unread #7 - Nov 29, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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    When I said 3 colors, I mean that incorporate the render with the background if you know what I'm saying. Focus on blending.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Nov 30, 2009 at 3:39 PM
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    Ahhh. Hmmm blending. Should I just duplicate it and smudge it?
    Btw, how is it?
     
  17. Unread #9 - Nov 30, 2009 at 6:32 PM
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    A simple way to blend is basically an example from your sig. A gradient map with layer settings with low contrast.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Nov 30, 2009 at 6:41 PM
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    wow alot of things going on with your sig. I agree with kaibin, needs some more blending. Nice sig over all though
     
  21. Unread #11 - Nov 30, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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    Well to sum it up; work on your blending, light, and text. Although the depth is very good, she looks out of place. People do not usually put the focal point into the center of the sig because it does not contribute to the flow.
     
  23. Unread #12 - Nov 30, 2009 at 7:46 PM
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    my signature's better :p
     
  25. Unread #13 - Dec 5, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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    Thanks for your feedback? -.-

    Umm thanks?
     
  27. Unread #14 - Dec 5, 2009 at 3:44 PM
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    the text does not blend is the biggest problem to me
     
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