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  1. The Artist

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    Roger's Beat This!
    Here my last work! C&C pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

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    The Artist, Nov 21, 2009
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  2. Kiabin

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    The lighting on the head is in the wrong place. It's one of your best clearly. The smudges on the right shoulder are a bit strong also. Just fix those things.
     
    Kiabin, Nov 22, 2009
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    were should i put the lightining?
     
    The Artist, Nov 24, 2009
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    I don't really know alot, but I think you should move it abit to the left, just past his hair, near the green bit.
     
    Kadaj, Nov 24, 2009
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    Where the light is coming from.
     
    Haunted, Nov 24, 2009
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    I like the smudging. Looks nice.
     
    Yawar, Nov 25, 2009
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    I don't like how he blends into the background, it's slightly fake, maye a c4d/clipping mask/space stock to cover it up?

    And the lighting remarks are right, move the lighting about 20px left.
     
    T R 1 B A L, Nov 25, 2009
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