Angel Signature

I made a signature with an angel (I think) on it .

V1:



Render's really bright, text isn't that good. Too bright (in KAIBAN's oppinon).

V2:



Fixed brightness (I think), removed some extra colors, and [tried] to make the text look good.
I'm going to continue to try to improve it.

V3:



I removed the yellow to keep it about 3 colors, like KAIBAN said.
But now it feels kinda empty on the left side.
Need more help/advice!

V4:



Kaiban told me to add a spacestock on the left,
I did, and it doesn't look as empty on the left side anymore.


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I edited this signature with the advice of KAIBAN .
In this signature I used a lot of c4ds, coming outward from the angel.
Please tell me what I could improve on, C&C .

 

The colors don't blend whatsoever. The render is WAY too bright. The blue doesn't blend at all with the red. It's like 50 different random colors thrown into one sig. Work on blending for more CC.

 

The text and bg could use a bit help, and the skin color a bit 2 bright. but other than that it's nice

 

Are you talking about the blue on the left? And yeah, I'll lower brightness of render. 50 random colors? I tried to focus mainly on a dark red color. Is it good besides the colors?

I suck at text xD. What do you mean by bg? Background? Well that basicly means tat the signature needs a bit of help, because a signature is basicly a background with a render. But thanks .

 

It was exaggeration when I said 50 different colors. It's colors don't flow well together is what I'm trying to say exactly. From just looking at it, I can see red, blue, and green. Try to make it focus between two colors, or if 3, make them small and not as noticeable. I'm not trying to be cocky, but look at my current sig. It has a 3 color scheme going on. Red, pink, and yellow. All of them which are pastels. I incorporated those 3 without making too much of a focal point if you get what I'm saying.

 

Hah! I knew you were exaggerating.. What do you mean by pastels? And I'm going to update this signature and post a V2 .

EDIT: Updated all the way to a V3. I removed some of the blue and yellow, so it only has about 3 colors now.
It seems kinda empty on the left side now :/. Anything else?

 

Make the render (Angel) blend a little bit more.

 

You can put the pastel colors on the color menu when you choose a brush color. It's hard to explain. I haven't seen V3, as it's taking a while to load, but when I see it, I'll try to CC more.


EDIT: V3 is actually the best out of those 3. You can fill the negative space with a space stock set to lighten usually.

 

create a new layer on top of everything and put the hue down some.
also the text isnt good colored or noticeable.
its too colorful on the left also.

 

Ummm.. okay. I really don't see how I could blend it more.

Thanks! I'll try the spacestock thing.

Hmmm what will the hue do? Make it less bright? And I thought my text was pretty good, but I'll try to put some color into it.


EDIT: Posted a V4 with the idea of putting spacestock on the left from KAIBAN .