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Discussion in 'Showcase Archives' started by Kola, Nov 18, 2009.

  1. Kola

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    Hey Guis! *wavewave*

    I got a new sig for ya'll to criticize ;).
    Now i couldn't decide which version was better so im gonna post all three and you tell me which one is the best MMMKKAAAYYY?!

    VS1;
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    VS2;
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    VS3;
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    inspirud by;

    note; skip to 2:14 if you are impatient.​
     
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    Hey Guis! *wavewave*

    i like more version 3. has very nice flow, lightining and depth. but dont likke the border
     
  3. Kola

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    Hey Guis! *wavewave*

    I did that kind of border on purpose to elongate the signature and create more depth/flow.
     
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    Not Bad, I like VS3 Better but.
     
  5. Kola

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    but what?
     
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    Hey Guis! *wavewave*

    Pfft, I don't know about you, but I love the border.

    Anyways, in v3 the abstract object on the right really makes the sig stand out. Incredible flow, good job. Can't think of anything to criticize about =]
     
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    I'd say get rid of the border along the bottom and side.
    Background is empty.
     
  8. Kola

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    its supposed to be empty. If i overload the sig with too much, it takes away the focus and the emotion ;).
     
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    Foreground and no borders aswell as the way it flows suggests that this is a snapshot of a much bigger picture. Except with the current background she is sitting against a wall. Don't get me wrong though, it is very well made
     
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    Hey Guis! *wavewave*

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    I think the v3 is great but somehow I feel that is it too dull..
     
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    Tag is a bit dull, more could of been done with it.
    Added some colors maybe you could've added some c4d's or other effects.
     
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    v3. If you aren't going to get rid of the border (since it's actually pretty creative/dynamic), make it far thinner, about 2px max.

    Also, you need a more dynamic background to compliment the focal/subject, and the c4d on her arm doesn't work.

    Try maybe effect c4ds/a star/nebula stock?
     
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