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thanks for the great advice you fucking nigger

 

That is the shittiest piece of feedback I have ever seen. It's on the same level as someone posting on a thread of mine saying "I don't like it".
Squidge, can a player be reported and infracted for that kind of post?

 

ya he could but to be fair so could i for calling him a nigger so if your gonna report him your gonna have to report me too. your choice tbh idgaf

 

Haha why would I report you, to be honest, I don't think calling him a nigger is an infractable offense. You commented that his post was pointless/meaningless (in a non-direct manner), and calling him a nigger is no worse than people calling each other fags all over Sythe. You have done slight wrong, but nothing that bad.

And also, I was just thinking, maybe try and lower the fill of the text? just so it doesn't completely mask the image/render beneath?

 

mm ok ill try that

 

Hrmm... looking at it, if you lowered the fill too much, it could potentially merge into the background c4d, is there any way to darken the text to a slightly deeper purple while still lowering the fill %?

 

lowered it not too much

 

Coole9, that's called ripping.

Squidge, the flow's a little fucked at the focal, composition's good, though as xjaa said the lighting's absolutely wrong (you should've just upped the contrast and done no brushing, that would have been enough for lighting.)
Text should be really thin 1px sharpened text (with one of the main colours), backed by a bold type (but not graffiti you mug).

get that horrendous blurred smudging out and sharpen it - the montage effect in the first versions is decentish when it comes to depth anyways.

 

Wouldn't he have to claim it as his own for it to be ripping..?