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  1. Unread #1 - Oct 28, 2009 at 8:35 PM
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    sprite in sig etc cnc.

    sorry tribal for not un beveling the text but i made it warmer for you as requested.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Oct 28, 2009 at 8:51 PM
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    In my opinion, purple isn't the best color, but, I like the use of it in this sig. I only think the bubble c4ds should be sharpened a bit more to make it complete. I really like this one.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Oct 29, 2009 at 12:11 AM
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    Text > Lower Middle Left > Blend > Go
     
  7. Unread #4 - Oct 29, 2009 at 12:51 AM
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    ok den
     
  9. Unread #5 - Oct 29, 2009 at 12:53 AM
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  11. Unread #6 - Oct 29, 2009 at 12:55 AM
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    blended sorry
     
  13. Unread #7 - Oct 29, 2009 at 12:57 AM
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    lower, and go for a different font with some transparency
     
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    ok 1sec pls
     
  17. Unread #9 - Oct 29, 2009 at 1:08 AM
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    Change the font, the embossing doesn't fit with the background.
    Much better than original though.
     
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    alrighty
     
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  27. Unread #14 - Oct 29, 2009 at 1:31 AM
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    The solidness of the yellow line bothers me. I think it would be nicer if you had the yellow make more of a collision effect around the sprite. The sprite just doesn't seem focused enough to me.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Oct 29, 2009 at 1:36 AM
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    ok so like smudge around where the line hits the sprite and sharpen it a tad. thats a good idea tbh
     
  31. Unread #16 - Oct 29, 2009 at 1:47 AM
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    did my best >.
    yeah i made it smaller
     
  33. Unread #17 - Oct 29, 2009 at 2:30 AM
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    Ahh, now it's too sharp. :eek:

    The first version was the best... Only thing I don't like, is that the sprite seems a little bit too large.
     
  35. Unread #18 - Oct 29, 2009 at 2:47 AM
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    Hmm the line should line up with his right arm mayhaps.
     
  37. Unread #19 - Oct 31, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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    I think it is definitely better that way.
     
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