Battered

It looks good but, I don't like that smaller version of the image on the right. And the sand or whatever it is, doesn't look that nice. Overall, it looks pretty good 6/10.

 

The colors are a bit too hard. It's hard to make out the focal. And the render placement could be better.

 

Thanks. And BTW, it isn't sand. It is a light smudging with a grunge brush.

 

verrrrry messy. clipping mask and text take away from the focal.
sharpen the focal and blur the other parts to bring it out more. there is no depth otherwise.
light source is what?
not toooo bad tho..