A sig I made for somebody

Somebody wanted a signature, but He didn't tell me what he wanted. I saw his post and made one. I know its not as good as you guys can do, but here it is:



And,


Please tell me what I could of done better.

 

In the first one, the render shouldn't be hidden, and it looks like you blurred/smudged the background and thats it.

2nd one, idk. Too tired to CnC.

 

Both of them need borders in my opinion; it seems to spice an image up.
The text needs working on. But nice sigs overall.

 

u could of made them have a good focus point i look at them and see nothing interesting? add more deph and colors