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hi, i thought i'd share the sig i made for Aje .



cnc please

 

The text isn't needed at all, as it doesn't match the theme. Also, brighten the sig a bit. It'll probably be one of the best I've seen from you.

 

Agree with K about the text and try it with out the border.

 

Well obviously the text is needed if it's for the kid's pin shop..

It's just poor choice of font and color.

It's a very bland sig and it's definitely too small

 

Well, the theme wouldn't match if you were selling something. That's just my opinion. And, you don't have to try to be a know it all, as you DON'T know it all.

 

Not bad, I would suggest making the text Dominant over the background.

 

i like the font and color, lmao 'kid's pin shop' w/e .

it got DEPTH in it, and it's definitely not small . the average SIGNATURE size is about 400x150 .
u should need to visit some gfx sites and learn something, then come here to crit my works .

 

If you're gonna put text in relating to a pin shop, at least make the whole tag related to it.

Not a fan of borders, also work on contrast.

 

I agree with squidge/KIABIN. If you're going to make the signature commercial, at least base it around an aspect of the commerce, or learn how, rather than creating a signature and just slapping irrelavant text on the top.

The signature itself is pretty decent, it has two focal points/ little flow/lighting, though it is definitely one of the best i've seen from you, so keep up the good work.

Learn to integrate text into the theme of the signature to make it work, rather than slapping it on. You could do this by juxtaposing it (in a sense that it'd fit with the flow and composition), adding it to the flow, clipping/smudging, having it as a lighting source, etc.