Tyro aka Cornchip girl

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I would REALLY like the first one if it didn't have any renders. It's a great text color and matches the sythe skin completely. The second on the other hand isn't too great. Just take the cc I've given you before.

 

Yeah the thing is that it had no renders. I just did a less than 60 second paint over the background on the original image. The idea was the cornchip girl, etc.

These were both 3 min images thrown together. Just working on my technique a bit.

I kind of like the background on the second one but I overdid it and just didn't feel like going back and editing it to the original effect I had.

Thanks though

 

The text effect is brilliant imo. I love the color of it.

 

Okay, the first, as KIABIN said, the render really doesn't go with anything else in the sig, sizewise, colour wise or in any other way.

The text is nice, though it's a little plain, the glow is a tad too obvious for my liking, and the font spacing could be better, so that the T and Y didn't touch.

You should really really read up on some tutorials and create more technical signatures, rather than plain "pizza topping" signatures.

By that, i mean in both of the signatures, nothing has anything to do with anything else, they just look like the toppings of a pizza, rather than having many technical aspects, such as depth, flow and lighting.

 

True, I'll have to do that

As I said, these were race signatures. It took about 3mins each

 

in the nicest way possible, no audience gives a shit about the time it takes to make a signature. It's all about the end product, and for the average standard, these are pretty sloppy.

Work on the aspects i listed earlier on in the thread.